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                 <h1>Conference venues</h1>
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-                    PyCon CZ 23 will take place at two separate venues: first two days with talks will be at Gabriel Loci and the last day full of workshops will be held at one of the Prague’s universities.
+                    PyCon CZ 23 will take place at two separate venues: the first two days with talks (Friday and Saturday) will take place at Gabriel Loci and the workshop day will be held at one of Prague’s universities.
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-                <h2>Gabriel Loci – The talk’s venue</h2>
+                <h2>Gabriel Loci – Talks venue</h2>
                 <p class="lead">Our main venue is a former monastery re-made into a unique event space.</p>
-                <p>All events on Friday 15 and Saturday 16 September will happen here. This includes talk, Board Game Night and the Afterparty.</p>
+                <p>All events on Friday and Saturday September 15–16 will happen here. This includes talks, the Board Game Night and the Afterparty.</p>
 
                 <p>Situated near the picturesque Kinsky Garden in the center of Prague, Gabriel Loci is a Neo-Romanesque complex built as a convent in the late 19th century. It includes intriguing spaces like The Garden of Eden – a spacious hall with a spectacular glass ceiling, or the Church of the Annunciation with beautiful paintings. The complex features artistic decoration in the style of the Beuron Art School, founded by a confederation of Benedictine monks in Germany.</p>
 
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                 <h2>Workshops venue</h2>
-                <p class="lead">All workshops on Sunday 17 September will be held at the at a university in Prague. Exact place will be specified as soon as it’s confirmed.</p>
+                <p class="lead">All workshops on Sunday, September 17 will be held at a university in Prague. The exact place will be specified as soon as it’s confirmed.</p>
 
                 <h3>Accessibility</h3>
                 <p>This will be a modern building that is fully accessible.</p>