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-> END

===bonus_2===
Honestly? I can't remember. But that would be a good thing to figure out... hey, shouldn't you know that? #speaking:npc #portrait:adrian-neutral
August? He's left handed. #speaking:npc #portrait:adrian-neutral
...Hey wait, shouldn't you know that already?
-> END
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===intro===
Julian. You're here. #speaking:erika #portrait:julian-neutral
Julian. You're here. #speaking:erika #portrait:julian-neutral #color:black
August gave me a copy of the key yesterday, but I went to a friend’s house last night. #speaking:npc
You— you know what happened, right? #speaking:erika
Yeah. Adrian called me. I’m supposed to give a statement tomorrow about the hours leading up to his death. #speaking:npc #portrait:julian-angry
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-> END

===topic_1===
My brother wasn't suicidal. Did you think that he was suicidal? #speaking:npc #portrait:julian-angry
My brother wasn't suicidal. Did you think that he was suicidal? #speaking:npc #portrait:julian-angry #color:black
No. Never. #speaking:erika
In fact, I can say with 99% f*cking certainty that he wasn't planning to kill himself last night. #speaking:npc
(I mean, I believe him... but what makes him so sure? What were they doing last night?) #speaking:erika #color:navy
-> END

===topic_2===
He said yesterday that he had something to show me tomorrow. It seemed like it was something big. He was really excited about it. #speaking:npc #portrait:julian-angry
He said yesterday that he had something to show me tomorrow. It seemed like it was something big. He was really excited about it. #speaking:npc #portrait:julian-angry #color:black
And he was talking about all these things that he had to do today.
I know people can fake these things, but… he's my f*cking brother. I could just tell, you know?
-> END

===topic_3===
I arrived in Larsen around 7:30. August picked me up from the train station and we got to Le Consulat at 8. #speaking:npc #portrait:julian-neutral
I arrived in Larsen around 7:30. August picked me up from the train station and we got to Le Consulat at 8. #speaking:npc #portrait:julian-neutral #color:black
We were there until 10. Just shooting the sh*t, honestly; we weren't eating for that long. And then we went to this bar—it was called something weird. Snail Trails, maybe.
We each had one drink and we watched a basketball game. Can't remember who was playing. But August kept looking at his watch. Around midnight, he said that he had to do something, but he would see me tomorrow. He had something important to show me, he said.
(Something important? What is he talking about?) #speaking:erika #color:navy
-> END

===topic_4===
He never said what it was. I figured it was for work. #speaking:npc #portrait:julian-neutral
He never said what it was. I figured it was for work. #speaking:npc #portrait:julian-neutral #color:black
I should've asked. Maybe I— maybe I could've prevented his death. #portrait:julian-angry
-> END

===topic_5===
No idea. But he seemed happy about it. #speaking:npc #portrait:julian-neutral
No idea. But he seemed happy about it. #speaking:npc #portrait:julian-neutral #color:black
He seemed awfully f*cking sincere for someone who was planning to kill himself in an hour. #portrait:julian-angry
-> END

===topic_6===
I don't think so. Honestly. #speaking:npc #portrait:julian-neutral
I don't think so. Honestly. #speaking:npc #portrait:julian-neutral #color:black
I know that suicidal people sometimes seem calmer right before they die or whatever, but I don't even remember him being happier than usual.
He was just... normal.
-> END

===bonus_1===
I— #speaking:npc #portrait:julian-angry
I— #speaking:npc #portrait:julian-angry #color:black
I'm so f*cking angry, Erika.
My goddamn brother is dead. How could I not be?
I had to tell my parents. I'm never going to forget my mom's scream. God, it haunts me.
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-> END

===outro===
I'm really sorry, Jules. #speaking:erika
I'm really sorry, Jules. #speaking:erika #color:black
Yeah. I'm sorry, too. #speaking:npc #portrait:julian-neutral
I wish I could have done something.
Actually... #speaking:erika
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