From 3b44ce0078b4f56c315a19ad4ade23243fdf4658 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: candida-d <62548908+candida-d@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Mon, 30 Sep 2024 17:40:29 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] trim copy

---
 .../tutorials/proposals/maker-volume-rebate-program.md |  2 +-
 .../proposals/volume-discount-program-proposal.md      | 10 +++-------
 2 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)

diff --git a/docs/tutorials/proposals/maker-volume-rebate-program.md b/docs/tutorials/proposals/maker-volume-rebate-program.md
index 0e45c3549..5d708d37a 100644
--- a/docs/tutorials/proposals/maker-volume-rebate-program.md
+++ b/docs/tutorials/proposals/maker-volume-rebate-program.md
@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@ This page describes what you need to propose enabling or replacing the program,
 You will need:
 * A connected [Vega wallet](../../tools/vega-wallet/index.md), with your wallet name and public key to hand
 * A minimum of the value set in the following network parameters. You need whichever amount is larger associated with that public key: <NetworkParameter frontMatter={frontMatter} param="governance.proposal.VolumeRebateProgram.minProposerBalance" hideValue={true}/>  or <NetworkParameter frontMatter={frontMatter} param="spam.protection.proposal.min.tokens" hideValue={true}/>.
-* Familiarity with [governance on Vega](../../concepts/governance/index.md)
+* Familiarity with [governance](../../concepts/governance/index.md)
 
 ## Anatomy of a maker rebate program proposal
 The fields below all need to be defined to enable the program or replace an existing one. 
diff --git a/docs/tutorials/proposals/volume-discount-program-proposal.md b/docs/tutorials/proposals/volume-discount-program-proposal.md
index b41dc16eb..447ce9603 100644
--- a/docs/tutorials/proposals/volume-discount-program-proposal.md
+++ b/docs/tutorials/proposals/volume-discount-program-proposal.md
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ This page describes what you need to propose enabling or replacing the volume di
 You will need:
 * A connected [Vega wallet](../../tools/vega-wallet/index.md), with your wallet name and public key to hand
 * A minimum of whichever is larger, associated with that public key: based on the network parameter values for <NetworkParameter frontMatter={frontMatter} param="governance.proposal.VolumeDiscountProgram.minProposerBalance" /> or <NetworkParameter frontMatter={frontMatter} param="spam.protection.proposal.min.tokens" />
-* Familiarity with [governance on Vega](../../concepts/governance/index.md)
+* Familiarity with [governance](../../concepts/governance/index.md)
 
 ## Anatomy of a volume discount program proposal
 The fields below all need to be defined to enable the volume discount program or replace an existing one. 
@@ -208,13 +208,9 @@ vegawallet.exe transaction send --wallet YOUR_WALLETNAME --pubkey YOUR_PUBLIC_KE
 </Tabs>
 
 ## Voting
-All proposals are voted on by the community. 
+To vote, participants need, at a minimum, the larger of the value of the following network parameters <NetworkParameter frontMatter={frontMatter} param="governance.proposal.VolumeDiscountProgram.minVoterBalance" /> or <NetworkParameter frontMatter={frontMatter} param="spam.protection.voting.min.tokens" /> associated to their Vega key.
 
-To vote, community members need, at a minimum, the larger of the value of the following network parameters <NetworkParameter frontMatter={frontMatter} param="governance.proposal.VolumeDiscountProgram.minVoterBalance" /> or <NetworkParameter frontMatter={frontMatter} param="spam.protection.voting.min.tokens" /> associated to their Vega key.
-
-Your proposal will need [participation](../../concepts/governance/lifecycle.md#how-the-outcome-is-calculated) of <NetworkParameter frontMatter={frontMatter} param="governance.proposal.VolumeDiscountProgram.requiredParticipation" /> and a majority of <NetworkParameter frontMatter={frontMatter} param="governance.proposal.VolumeDiscountProgram.requiredMajority" />. 
-
-Proposers who invite feedback, engage with comments, and make revisions to meet the needs of the community are more likely to be successful.
+The proposal will need [participation](../../concepts/governance/lifecycle.md#how-the-outcome-is-calculated) of <NetworkParameter frontMatter={frontMatter} param="governance.proposal.VolumeDiscountProgram.requiredParticipation" /> and a majority of <NetworkParameter frontMatter={frontMatter} param="governance.proposal.VolumeDiscountProgram.requiredMajority" />. 
 
 ## Enactment
 If successful, the program changes will go live in the epoch following the time you specify in the `enactmentTimestamp` field.
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